Doing a rehearsal performance of the production, we saw how our group's (5:30-12:35) performance looked at its current stage, and the flaws evident as a result. When reviewing our extract, I can see how the attempt was rife in errors and I will review what my issues were and what I need to do to fix them.
Firstly, with a focus to "I'd Do Anything" a flaw I noticed immediately was my overplaying of the counting money gambit. For most of the song, I am separate from the rest of my group just sighing and moving around imaginary coins. I feel that this is an immediate red flag as it is this overplaying of this technique that makes it a bad inclusion to the movement of I'd Do Anything". Not only that but it is boring and distracting from whoever is singing. Thus, for the real performance, I will get rid of the counting money as it is too distracting and shallow in its movement and I will just sit there with a moody look to allow Rejoice, Matt and Yolanda to have the full attention of the audience during their singing parts.
Another issue was how early Yolanda was when pulling me out of my seat to join the song. because of bad timing, her persuasion to get me out of my seat was too early in the song, so it just looked awkward and unprofessional in that awkward space between where we were supposed to do the sequence. And so, another note I will take from this is to go through the song with Yolanda to ensure that interaction is clean and perfectly timed. Furthermore, our choreography in the song had issues too, with all of us starting the dance at different times and with Matt forgetting the sequence altogether. The issue resides not in the difficulty of the movement piece, just in practice. And so as another feedback point we will rehearse that sequence repetitively until we learn it off by heart.
When looking at "You've Got To Pick A Pocket Or Two.", I will argue that this was actually decently performed. I would like to argue that my energy was good and my accent was of acceptable quality. However, one giant flaw that needs fixing is my forgetting the lyric "I recall he started small" in my 3rd verse, and instead I just awkwardly mumbled where the lyric should be. To ensure this does not happen on the night, I will focus on learning that 3rd verse and singing it repeatedly until I have absorbed the material fully.
Hence, Oliver Twist does have some obvious flaws, but all in all, I will argue there is a strong foundation there and with devoted rehearsals to fixing these highlighted red flags, our group piece will be of great quality in time for the performance.
Solo
When reviewing my solo performance (10:03 - 17:44), I will argue that the performance was of a generally good quality with both strong strengths and flaws. I believe for example a strength of mine in this extract was my demonic characterisation of Sweeney. With the previously worked upon movement and facial expressions, combined with an overall feeling of insanity with the song, I felt that my characterisation for Sweeney Todd was of a good standard and did not require much tweaking.
However, when focusing on my flaws, a flaw we had with "Pretty Women" was how unprepared Matt was. As he had to use hi sphone to check his lyrics, and we would struiggle to harmonsie in the song, the song itself is a flaw for us. Therefore, for "pretty Women" I will either assist Matt in learning the lyrics or find a replacement. Another flaw of mine was my incorrect timing of lyrics when I said "Pretty Women accidentally when I was meant to say "Stay Forever". As I got my lyrics confused, I will be sure to rehearse the song to myself to ensure I know the correct order of the lyrics.
Aside from that, however, I believe that my singing in both songs was of good quality. It was clear and at a good rhythm. The only thing that I feel I need to work on is projection. At the start of "Pretty Women" when I say "And what may I do for you, sir? A stylish trimming of the hair? A soothing skin massage?" it is hard to hear in the camera which means the audience members at the back of the theatre will not have heard me. So in terms of voice, I will focus on projecting both my songs and dialogue.